GCSE English Language 3b – EXTEND – Monologue from a picture – Student work Uploaded

We did two lessons on creating characters and their monologues from images.

The key foci were:
1. Writing with flair
2. Creating a “compelling” text through language, structure and punctuation
3. Originality
4. Sophisticated vocabulary

Download (PPTX, 3b-Unit-Lesson-5-Image-creates-story.pptx, 3.96MB)

 

oscar

Lucy and Georgie’s Recording

Alex, Mazza and Lisa’s Recording

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olympic showjump

James, Clazza, Betty S’s recording

ballerina

Annie and J Lo’s recording

Adam’s recording

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paralympics

Marco and Tom’s recording:

Riri and Corinne’s recording:

child soldier

Abi, Hatty and Baz’s recording

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Gladiator

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Riot

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summit

(C) Bishop Justus Church of England School

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  1. Marco and Toms…
    Really good! I loved the vocabulary… especially, ‘the immense weight of pressure and expectation on my shoulders pushing me too the ground.’ – Love the imagery there and I also love the short sentences/phrasing in the speech, ‘the moment of my life, the moment of my dreams.’
    The climax was good as well because as you came nearer to the end, the reader’s (marco) voice grew to a crescendo and the short sentences gave a really good excited atmosphere.
    A really good monologue!
    Well done 🙂

    • Chris Healey Chris Healey

      Could you add this to the paralympics “pad let” just click on the image and type

  2. Rianna

    Wow you guys have really surpassed yourselves the imagery was amazing from the fist sentence. “The roars of the statdium like a gladitorial arena slapped me in the face”. Very descriptive the use of a metaphor immediately drew me in. Well Done! 🙂

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